The voki doesn't work for this question. You need to be picking up on these things that you're talking about and the voki doesn't make sense, have you played it back to yourself?
You need to make specific references to the social groups. You haven't mentioned them and you need to give much more detail than this. You need to explain with more detail, what you put in place to represent the ideology of your audience. How did you use language etc... Again please let me know if you are changing this or not.
Which articles are you talking about in the second voki? I can't follow it so the examiner won't. You need to be considering the question before you approach it, you're not writing it for you, you're doing it for somebody who is looking to mark you down at the earliest opportunity. You're over using the Voki because you think it's less work.
The evaluation in total is worth the exact same amount of marks as your entire research and planning, it is meant to take you time to do. Don't slack off.
If you must use a voki, use one as if they were the audience for your magazine. Get one to describe themself as a person whom your magazine is targeted to.
Sorry, I got confused as to what question you were answering. You need to look at this question entirely again. It goes no way to answering the demands.
The voki doesn't work for this question. You need to be picking up on these things that you're talking about and the voki doesn't make sense, have you played it back to yourself?
ReplyDeleteYou need to make specific references to the social groups. You haven't mentioned them and you need to give much more detail than this. You need to explain with more detail, what you put in place to represent the ideology of your audience. How did you use language etc... Again please let me know if you are changing this or not.
Which articles are you talking about in the second voki? I can't follow it so the examiner won't. You need to be considering the question before you approach it, you're not writing it for you, you're doing it for somebody who is looking to mark you down at the earliest opportunity. You're over using the Voki because you think it's less work.
The evaluation in total is worth the exact same amount of marks as your entire research and planning, it is meant to take you time to do. Don't slack off.
If you must use a voki, use one as if they were the audience for your magazine. Get one to describe themself as a person whom your magazine is targeted to.
ReplyDeleteSorry, I got confused as to what question you were answering. You need to look at this question entirely again. It goes no way to answering the demands.
ReplyDelete